Planet Smoothie Franchise

This is a short entry so I would like to work at Planet Smoothie. If you want to spice it up a bit please do not hesitate to throw in suggestions / rewrite to make me the best candidate for the position. THANKS A LOT! ...


As a company founded by Martin Sprock franchise in 1995 and operating in over 125 locations around the world ... I would like to offer the best customer service possible while in a safe environment that would allow me to grow as individuals. Not only do I see a lot of citizenship, but I'm having fun ...

It's a bit clinical. Try to show a little excitement. the first sentence to go, if you want them to know that you reasearched society, simply drag a hint about it. "I never knew what a great company this is! Something like that. Citizenship Umm ... No. It looks like a really cool place to work." There can be more technical language but it shows the desire, positive attitude, enthusiasm, etc. I do not know what is the position of your courses, but if you have direct contact with the public. Attitude. Dude. Positive, happy, friendly, courteous. Anyway good luck!